tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4441717881897857879.post3680724317290965808..comments2023-04-12T16:15:23.248+05:30Comments on Scribbles: GoodbyePavilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10101956425144957746noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4441717881897857879.post-10358631512011626412010-08-15T12:35:01.056+05:302010-08-15T12:35:01.056+05:30There are some tough decisions that we have to tak...There are some tough decisions that we have to take...coz at some point it becomes inevitable...however some these decisions come back to haunt us repeatedly and we refuse to forgive ourselves!<br /><br />well written!...the story had a nice flow to it :)<br /><br />All the best for BAT!!!mayurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16512914377140705150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4441717881897857879.post-43681393469697958562010-08-14T08:42:50.320+05:302010-08-14T08:42:50.320+05:30stark combination of reality and the decisions we ...stark combination of reality and the decisions we ought to make.Sidra Sayeedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07099868671152565795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4441717881897857879.post-59798996673246375012010-08-12T19:09:18.159+05:302010-08-12T19:09:18.159+05:30That was really emotional. Of all the names, why d...That was really emotional. Of all the names, why did the kid have to choose Gauri? Brought a lump to my throat.<br /><br />All the best!Keerthi Purushothamanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18418423877207466952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4441717881897857879.post-2129219159134868922010-08-11T01:07:17.463+05:302010-08-11T01:07:17.463+05:30Nice post. As Vee already suggested, paragraph spa...Nice post. As Vee already suggested, paragraph spacing would indeed be helpful.<br />ATB for BAT13<br /><a href="http://survivaloftheoptimist.blogspot.com/2010/08/goodbye.html" rel="nofollow">Gkam - Goodbye</a>Gaurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12502915691020891469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4441717881897857879.post-80667760234028200792010-08-10T16:14:43.174+05:302010-08-10T16:14:43.174+05:30Hey good post.. I loved the way you expressed.. Gr...Hey good post.. I loved the way you expressed.. Great...<br /><br /><br />All The Best for BAT 13.<br /> <br /><a href="http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2010/08/goodbye.html" rel="nofollow">gmsaravana - Goodbye</a><br /> <br />Yours Frendly,<br />Someone Is SpecialSomeone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4441717881897857879.post-5615553417743736132010-08-10T10:18:28.270+05:302010-08-10T10:18:28.270+05:30Nice post Pavil. You brought out the kid's exp...Nice post Pavil. You brought out the kid's expressions and all very well in the first part of the story. And the sad ending in the latter part. Over all I liked the post.<br /><br />Some suggestions - Space between paragraphs would have helped improving the readability. And adding a relevant picture off the Internet would make it look impressive. Keep writing more stuff!!Veehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01191763226046803992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4441717881897857879.post-8028202598468716692010-08-08T22:41:39.564+05:302010-08-08T22:41:39.564+05:30that was some long story.. wish i could give that ...that was some long story.. wish i could give that time to my post, this college hasn't given me any spare time...<br /><br />anyways you left the thinking part with the readers, liked that would have liked it more if you would have elaborated the goodbye part...<br />dont know what am saying.. anyways keep writing <br /><br />HAPPY BLOGGING...Nikhil Patokarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10507314852705057274noreply@blogger.com