This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-Ton 58; the fifty-eighth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. In association with Saravana Kumar Murugan, the editor of Shades Of Life book series.
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I have had enough of this made up world now. Out there......they keep judging you all the time & on the contrary the justice system, which is actually supposed to pass on judgements.....hardly delivers.
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. Mother.....take me back to your Womb.....I want to get there.......& no...don't judge me...I'm not afraid....my problem is....it all looks like a futile effort.....May be I am wrong but just may be....I could be right.....so why take the chance.
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The Policeman read it again & again but could not make sense of it. He had never read such a suicide note in his entire career.
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short, sweet and effective. beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteI had a fragment of an idea but could not find enough time to elaborate. But I wanted to participate anyhow...this being Ativas'......50'th participation. and then I was not sure how it came up.....I got my niece to read it up for an opinion & she said it's okay. Thanks for your comments.
ReplyDeleteYou always have a tang at the end :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Unknown. I thought I was having a good idea but then my laziness prevailed. I plan to update this story further.
DeleteGood one, attempts to make an impact! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot.
DeletePavil, you certainly made an impact! And thank you so much for participating! Here's mine: Return
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
short but one which has an impact and is powerful
ReplyDeleteread my BlogATon58 post Refugee
Thank you Cifar.
DeletePowerful and sad.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to participate anyhow to celebrate your 50'th BlogaTon post. I had an idea based on a sad news, I thought it was good but could not elaborate more. I have plans to update this.
DeleteThanks for reading.
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